Taken from their homes
Said it was for their safety
Jail the perps! Not vics.
When the Japanese Americans were shuffled off to the concentration camps — oh, I’m sorry — the relocation centers during WWII, they wrote haiku and senryu to document their experiences. (I don’t know why they say “camps” or “centers” when they are prisons. Using softer words doesn’t change things.)
At Tule Lake Relocation Center, Japanese Americans joined The Tule Lake Senryu Kai group meeting weekly. At other relocation centers, similar groups were formed. Opler and Obayashi wrote in Senryu Poetry as Folk and Community Expression:
“The formation of a Senryu circle marked no sudden trend toward Japanization. Rather, this element of Japanese culture which lived among the first generation, or Issei, as a part of their cultural heritage, was revived when West Coast communities were uprooted, careers interrupted, and the long, uncomfortable trek inland begun on the shortest notice. Senryu poetry, then, is one aspect of the cultural revivalism which occurred with the first generation age group when they realized that their futures might be uncertain in this nation.”
It is to be noted that poetry groups among Japanese Americans was not a new phenomenon but dated back to the 1800s when they started immigrating to the United States. The groups often published a journal or small publication, even books, in Japanese and English. Very little has been preserved. The vast majority of the poets could not find willing publishers in the states and if they were published, most often were published in Japan. When WWII broke out, many quit their haiku/senryu/tanka groups as they were worried about seeming too Japanese and being targeted. Some even burned their poetry. Groups were reformed in the centers with veteran poets and new ones.
At Tule Lake, the group published their writings in Tessaku (Iron Gate). Opler and Obayashi explained that while both haiku and senryu used nature saying if a blossom is the topic that’s haiku; but if the blossom is a metaphor for a young girl then that’s senryu. At their meetings, the group would be given a topic and then write a poem with 45 minutes before the next topic is given. Meantime a chosen critic goes over the written poems to read aloud and critique to the group afterwards. Too vulgar and the poem was not read aloud — this one was considered too sexy for reading or for their pub:
(Topic : shoes)
Ara fushigi (Oh, incomprehensible!) Yamome no heyani (In a bachelor's room) Onna gutsu (Woman's shoes)
You wouldn’t think of senryu or haiku as protest poems but they can be. One Tule Lake poet Itaru Ina was separated from his family and sent to Bismarck. Before being relocated to Tule, his family and many others were housed in stables at Tanforan where his wife pregnant with their first child suffered. Angry at the circumstances, he asked that his family be repatriated to Japan and refused the loyalty oath. He was shipped to Bismarck with other dissidents. Itaru continued to write poetry. To avoid the censors, he smuggled the poems out in the seams and hems of clothing sent out to his wife to be mended. She and his children were still at Tule. He wrote the following poem in Tessaku 8 (1945)
kari ikuya shoheito ni itoma ari
Wild geese fly away —
the tower guards
are on a break
Because the senryu is not about geese but rather the geese are a metaphor for freedom/escape, it’s not a haiku. It breaks my heart to read it because I can see the scene. Here is another one of his.
tsuki suzushi tesso suke-te sanga ari
through the window’s iron bars
mountains and rivers.
In 1946, after the courts ruled that renunciation of citizenship under the duress of imprisonment was unconstitutional, Itaru was reunited with his family in March. They were freed July 9th. After returning to the San Francisco bay area in 1950, he joined the San Francisco Yukari Haiku Kai, serving as the leader until his death in 1977. (“Kai” means association, group, meeting). Some of his poetry is published on Modern Haiku.
Like the difference between a classic and pulp novel, while I admire the beauty of haiku with its perfect turn of a phrase, it’s senryu I love.
by Barbara Takei, Discover Nikkei, May 18, 2012
Senryu Poetry as Folk and Community Expression
by Marvin K. Opler and F. Obayashi
Journal of American Folklore, v. 58, n. 227, January-March 1945, pp. 1-11.
Tessaku [Barbed Wire], no. 6, Tule Lake, California, 1944
Wartime Internment of Civilians
U.S. Capitol Visitor Center
Haiku by Itaru Ina
haiku translated by Hisako Ifshin and Leza Lowitz
Photograph used for poem :
Tule Lake segregation center, Newell, California
May 1943 by O’Crotty, Pete, photographer
Farm Security Administration – Office of War Information photograph collection (Library of Congress)
View Daily Life in a Japanese-American Internment Camp Through the Lens of Ansel Adams
The Ansel Adams Gallery
Collection: Ansel Adams’s Photographs of Japanese-American Internment at Manzanar
Library of Congress
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