A folk tale told in haiku

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Just cuz you’re nice, doesn’t make you a fool: an old folktale
aka The Scorpion and The Tortoise (told in haiku)

river rushes by
scorpion asks for a ride
kindly tortoise nods

tap tap on the shell
“what are you doing up there?”
“trying to sting you”

shrugs, “it’s my nature”
“idiot” says the tortoise
diving down, “bye bye”

haiku by M. Nakazato LaFreniere

The scorpion stinging a friend on the river has various variants depending on the country.  Sometimes it’s a frog or a turtle.  Always his friend asks why and the scorpion answers, “It’s my nature.”  In the tortoise one, the scorpion is dumped and drowns but the sting does not penetrate the hardshell.  In the frog one, the frog dies and asks, “Why? You will die too.”  because the scorpion drowns as their friend dies.  It’s the same answer, “It’s my nature.”  With the turtle, sometimes the turtle dies and sometimes just dumps the scorpion to drown.

In some stories he convinces his close friend to carry him over; in some stories he sweet talks a creature swimming by into carrying him over who may or may not be acquainted with him.  Basically the morale of the story is a person or animal will revert back to their true nature eventually even if doing so is not in their best interests and will destroy themselves along with people/creatures around them and/or how much they love or care about their victim if the scorpion is great friends with the potential victim. So it’s either “Be careful of strangers no matter what they promise” or “Dump your friend quick once you know their truly colors”

Personally I think people and animals can change but it’s hard so you change for awhile and then revert and then change and revert.  Each time the changes last longer and the reversions are shorter in duration until they change for good.  However, not everyone or every animal can make a change.  While the change is being made, the person/animal changing has to believe the change will result in positive benefits.  If that belief/trust is lost, likely they will revert.  And yes, some of them are faking it and will revert.

Pinkie, my crazy cat, is becoming more domestic.  Lately she is actually letting me pet her.  She never used to let me do that and I am talking about seven years of never.  Sometimes in the middle of being petted, she remembers she doesn’t like to be touch and she will be bite.  I’ve noticed that I can tell when she is getting uncomfortable because her tail starts to twitch and I stop.

Pinkie never used to purr but in the last couple of months she has started purring.  I taught her to purr by laying down next to her and making purring notices.  Eventually she copied me.  She might have known before but I never heard it.  Now if I can get Pinkie and Midnight to get along or at least ignore each other, I would do a happy dance.


References:

I decided to do this folk tale haiku for the Open Link Night at dVerse Poets Pub. I originally wrote the haiku folktale on August 12, 2017 (without the paragraphs on the variants and Pinkie) and included a random picture that I took.

Also for Experimental on the Daily Post Weekly Photo Challenge, I will do my own photo later this week on my photo blog (looking for some infrared ones I did) but I thought it would be okay to include this because I changed two “real life” photos in photoshop to become one picture for my story.   As there was no picture that really fit my folk tale, I created one on September 20, 2017 and changed out the pics in the original post. I used Photoshop to merge a tortoise and a scorpion picture along with using some filters to change the look of the image from reality to this.  I posted how I did it in a three-part post on my other blog, Restructuring life:

  •  The Plan: showed the original two photos and what I planned to do
  • Part 1: Cutting out the scorpion (show 2 different ways to cut out the scorpion from it’s background)
  • Part 2: Resizing the scorpion on the tortoise (pasting the scorpion onto the tortoise picture, resizing and placing the scorpion so it looks right. Using the alt key when merging layers onto one layer to keep the old layers while creating the new one with everything)
  • Part 3: Filtering to make it look like a picture (had to backtrack, remove the merged layer to make the scorpion more blue to match the look of the tortoise more; make a new merged layer keeping the old layers; using filters and blend modes to create a more watercolor and ink look)

 

Creative Random Word Generator
Site where you can randomly generate 1-8 words. It’s also has some word mind games on the dropdown menu if you want some brain exercise. The tweening games looks interesting. I changed the setting to 1 and got Scorpion. 

The Scorpion and the Tortoise and other folktales about unnatural partnerships
edited by D. L. Ashliman, University of Pittsburgh

 

Open Link Night by Hayes Spencer
dVerse Poets Pub

Experimental
Weekly Photo Challenge
Daily Post

Image: I changed the photograph a bit in Photoshop but used 2 photographs as a base:

Some folk tales on Amazon:


Favorite Folktales from Around the World

American Tall Tales

Kalila wa Dimna, Vol. 1: – Fables of Friendship and Betrayal from the Panchatantra, Jatakas, Bidpai, Kalilah wa Dimnah and Lights of Canopus

The Original Folk and Fairy Tales of the Brothers Grimm: The Complete First Edition

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11 thoughts on “A folk tale told in haiku”

    1. Thank you! I am happy you loved it. Me too actually because the first one I ever read years ago, the scorpion killed the turtle. I like this version much better when I read it because it makes more sense to me with the tortoise’s hard shell. Plus he’s a nice guy really and I like the nice guys to survive.

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  1. The photoshop creation is cool. It’s not easy to bring two images together. I may have to incorporate your tips into my next photo-edit playtime. Behavior in all creatures is possible. Humans stand the greatest hope for change but sadly often decide to do nothing than to go through the rough patches toward those improvements. Interesting post. Thanks for visiting. Have a good weekend!

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    1. I’m glad you liked the image and the post. If you remember, share what you make in photoshop. I’ll look forward to seeing it. Change is hard — I’m not good at it either so I am rather surprised at how much Pinkie has changed. Thanks for the comment and stopping by.

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