Senryu : bang bang

3+

bang bang my baby
the sound explodes in the fog
secret’s bloody end

senryu by M. Nakazato LaFreniere

I’ve been doing a lot of poems without pics.  Does it matter?  Do you like it better with pics? Or are just the words fine?

I guess I’m thinking because I’d like to do e-books but to me I feel like the images and poems go together.  However some of the free ebook apps seem to be exporting text straight from word and pics may have problems with them unless you create the book in adobe indesign which I don’t have.  I really don’t like not having control over how a picture gets imported in and shows.

anyways just would love your two cents.

photograph in Second Life by M. LaFreniere,
featuring avatars Kayla Woodrunner and Winter Phoenix